My Daughter Got Hit by a Car!
by Melody
Last night, my friend Mary and I sat at my dining room table wrapping
up our writing critique meeting. I had just finished telling Mary that
my moving from Oregon to California was one of the few things that my
older daughter Melissa understood and
accepted. That's when Melissa called me. "
Mom," she said on the phone, "I've
got a sort of emergency." "An emergency? What's wrong?" "Well,
I just got hit by a car. What's your address?" She
sounded so nonchalant, as if she was calling to ask me to give her a
ride home from work. "What? Hit by a car? Where are you? What happened?" I
shouted.
She said she was on the corner of Calderon and Church Streets close
to downtown Mountain View, and the paramedics were there with her. "Give
me just a few minutes, and I'll be there."
I had to say good-bye to
Mary and take off. Mike was there, and I told him I had to leave. As I
pulled out of the driveway, Megan came running
around the corner. "Mom! I'm going with you," she shouted,
and she jumped into the passenger seat. We got to the intersection of Calderon
and Church
in about five minutes. My heart skipped a beat as I saw an ambulance
and a police car, and I had a tight feeling in my chest.
Melissa sat on
the hood of the ambulance surrounded by two paramedics.
She was holding her left wrist. She wore a dark blue Round Table Pizza
shirt. Her long jean shorts revealed scratches on both of her legs where
she had fallen.
The paramedics, two younger gentlemen in uniforms, introduced
themselves to me. "She refused to be taken to the hospital by ambulance, but
we recommend you take her there," one told me. "I don't want
to get stuck with the ambulance bill," said
Melissa. "Okay, I'll take her." I said. Melissa pointed
to a silver bike at the corner. I hadn't realized at first that she was
riding
a
bike when this happened. Also, there was a plastic bag with a small Round
Table pizza in it. Somehow, Melissa had managed to salvage the pizza.
I
helped Melissa get to the passenger seat of my car. She said she didn't
feel any pain at first, but now she hurt all over. Apparently, the driver
of the vehicle that hit her had stopped and given her phone number. "But,
it was my fault," said Melissa. "I
didn't look both ways."
We managed to cram Jamie's bike into the backseat
of my Toyota Corolla, which is no easy feat, and Megan sat in back with
the bike. I drove Melissa
to the emergency room of El Camino Hospital off Grant Road in Mountain
View.
Melissa groaned and held an ice pack on her left wrist and hand, which
she said hurt real bad. "And, my friends and I are supposed to go
to the Oz Fest tomorrow. It's an all day thing. I can't miss it!" "Don't
worry about that right now," I said, as I turned down
North Street towards the hospital and the emergency room. "The last
time I was here was around four years ago when Megan broke her arm. Remember
that?" "I remember," said Megan, who was in the back seat,
squished with the bike. "And, then there was the time when you
had a concussion, Melissa -- when the brakes went out on the bike you were
riding and you rode
right into that pole?" "Yeah," said Melissa. "Maybe
you should stay away from bikes," I
said. Melissa didn't find it funny at all. "I want to smoke a cigarette!" she
said. "You don't need a cigarette. C'mon."
I pulled
up in front of the emergency room where several people stood around with
a couple of people in wheelchairs. I helped Melissa get out
of the car so she wouldn't have to walk very far. Megan helped Melissa
inside, and after circling the emergency room about five times, I finally
found a parking spot.
When I finally made it into the emergency room, Melissa
was filling out paperwork to put into a large box for the Triage Nurse.
A long line
had already formed behind her because writing was laborious and time
consuming for her. Melissa was oblivious to it all. After about five
minutes, she slipped the piece of paper into the box, and we found places
to sit in the already overcrowded emergency room at El Camino Hospital.
Megan
and Melissa sat together, and I sat next to a young, thin guy with crutches
and a splint on his leg. He moved his crutches out of the
way so I could sit down. "This is going to take ages!" said Melissa,
looking around. "Yeah, like four hours at least," said the guy sitting next
to me. "I'm still waiting."
I looked at my cell phone which said 8:45 p.m. and sighed. Melissa shook
her head. "No matter what, I'm going to Oz Fest tomorrow! No way
am I gonna miss that. Ouch! Now my legs are starting to hurt, and this
cold pack isn't very cold anymore." "Maybe if you had taken
the ambulance in, they would've seen you sooner."
Melissa rolled her eyes. "Yeah,
right Mom."
The guy next to me shook his head. "Nope, that doesn't
help, although they did put the splint on my leg. I still have to wait,
and I got into
a motorcycle accident."
We looked at the guy's leg, and it was obvious
he was in some pain. "Mom, I really need a cigarette!" Melissa
wailed. "I thought you quit smoking." "I did, but
now I need a cigarette. I need to go outside and smoke."
"No, you don't need to smoke. You're gonna be okay, I promise.
Sooner or later, they'll take care of you."
"It's okay Melissa," said Megan. She put her arm around Melissa's
shoulders and Melissa hugged her. "Megan, what happened to your
face?" Melissa said. "It
looks sunburned! Don't you use sun block?" "Most of the time,
but I forgot one day," said
Megan. Her freckled face did look pretty red. "You must use sun
block all the time Megan. Or, you'll get skin cancer!"
Megan looked genuinely
frightened. "Don't scare her like that," I said. "Well,
it's true. Oh man, I can't move my wrist at all." "Just hang
in there Melissa." I
said.
We sat there for a few minutes wondering how many hours we'd be in
the emergency room as more people poured in. "I think someone died
about three hours ago," said
the young man sitting next to me.
Melissa, Megan and I all looked at each
other. "Ohhhh." "That's part of the reason it's taking
so long." The
guy's voice was soft, but clear. "That's probably it," I said. "But,
mostly, it's because of President Bush's latest tax cut! That's why we
have to sit in emergency rooms for so long. It's those
Republicans!" "Yeah, those damned Republicans," I said, looking
around the emergency room where people stared at us, wondering if expressing
political
opinions at this time was a good thing at this particular time. "Why
don't we have national health care in this country? Because of the greedy
corporations and the Republicans!" "Yeah!" I said. I figured
we had to blame long waits in emergency rooms on someone or something.
After all, we couldn't possibly blame
the hardworking doctors and nurses who were doing the best they could
to take care of everyone. "Clinton had a great national health
care plan, but what happened? It was shot down. That figures!" the young, soft spoken man went
on. "Yeah! I don't understand it either. I liked the national health
care idea," I said. "Those Republicans!"
People stared at
us with blank faces. Two little kids, a girl and a boy, ran around in circles
screaming. Melissa laughed in spite of the
pain she was in.
A nurse came out from a huge door and called out some names.
Apparently, the young man next to me was one of them. "Finally," he
said, as he slowly got up and I handed him his crutches.
The Triage nurse
finally called Melissa's name, and Megan and I went into the little room
with her. The nurse asked a whole bunch of questions
like, "Did you wear a helmet while riding a bike?" Of course
Melissa said no. She asked how badly she hurt on a scale of one to ten,
and Melissa said, "Eight!"
She took Melissa's blood pressure and
checked her eyes and wrote stuff down on paper. "She doesn't have
insurance. Is that okay?" I
asked. "It's okay. She's got to be seen by a doctor."
We
had to go back out into the waiting room so that Melissa could be seen
by a doctor, heaven knows when. Melissa asked to borrow my cell
phone. She called her friend Valery and told her what happened. She called
her brother Jeremy and told him what happened. "Can you believe
it?" said Melissa. "And,
I had big plans tonight and tomorrow! It's so unfair. Just my luck."
Melissa
and Megan looked at Glamor and YM Magazines which were lying on tables.
I left in such a hurry that I didn't even have my backpack
with notebook or book. Megan finally fell asleep lying across two chairs.
Melissa's friends Valery, Alex and a girl I didn't know named Larissa
showed up to keep us company. "Every muscle in every part of my
body aches!" said
Melissa, as her friends walked in.
Alex's hair was cut sort of like a Mohawk. "What happened to you?" I
asked. "Oh, I got drunk and asked one of my friends to cut my hair,
and this is what happened." Alex laughed. "Ohh no. Well, it'll
grow," I
said.
"This is taking forever," said Melissa. "I don't know
how much longer I can wait."
We had to relay the whole story to Melissa's
friends. "Well, we have great seats at the Oz Fest tomorrow," said
Alex. "And, we're supposed to be there by around nine o'clock tomorrow
morning."
It was already after eleven, going on midnight. "Good luck," I
said. "Oh man. I can't miss Marilyn Manson or Corn!" said Melissa, "or
Ozzy of course."
I admitted that I didn't care for Marilyn Manson or Corn much -- "But,
I do like Ozzie." "Oh no, don't get her started!" said Melissa,
as I began relaying my stories of concerts I'd seen in the 1970's. "It's
okay," said Alex. "I
like to hear about it."
I went out to the car and sneaked the small
Round Table Pizza, half pepperoni, half cheese, into the waiting room (you're
not supposed to
bring food into the waiting room) so we could all have some. By midnight,
we were all pretty hungry.
Finally, Melissa's name was called and she limped
beyond the big, heavy door that I remembered from the time Megan broke
her arm years ago. Megan
was fast asleep stretched across two chairs. I wished I could fall asleep
anywhere, any time like she can.
"After a while, I decided to go back and
see how she was doing. Only one person was allowed to be with a patient.
I had to get a special pass
from a security guard just to go in the back, and I felt important with
my sticker name tag as I was "buzzed" in by the security guard.
I
found Melissa lying on a Gurney in Exam Room 3. She looked tired and spaced
out. "The doctor said I'm going to hurt all over, and they
have to do x-rays on my hand and on my wrist. I sure hope they hurry
up. I wanna get out of here." Melissa wore one of those hospital
gowns and a hospital wrist band.
A nurse came in a couple of minutes later. "Now I'm going to give
you a pain pill before you get your x-rays. Here you go." She handed
Melissa a pill and a paper cup of water. Melissa gulped it down.
Just then,
my cell phone rang. Who would be calling me after midnight? It was Valery
from out in the waiting room calling from her cell phone. "How's
Melissa doing?" "Ma'am, you aren't allowed to use cell phones
back here," said
the nurse, so I hung up. "Sorry," I said.
When Melissa
came back from the x-rays, she was feeling no pain. "I'm going
to give you some more pain killers and muscle relaxers to take home with
you tonight as well." said the nurse. She gave
Melissa a whole bunch of Vicodins and some sort of muscle relaxer. "Oh
cool," said
Melissa, who was now feeling no pain.
Melissa fractured her wrist and broke
her thumb and aches all over. But, she's going to be okay. Her hand and
wrist were wrapped, and she
has a sling. Apparently, she'll need a cast. She left with her friends,
while I dragged Megan out to the car and went home -- after 1:00 a.m.
And, I had to get up and go to work this morning.
Today I called to find
out how Melissa was doing. First, I called Valery who was at the Oz Fest.
She had to shout to talk to me. "Melissa
wasn't feeling well, so she's resting at Jamie's house. She's with her
brother Jeremy and she'll join us later before Corn comes on!"
So,
I called Jeremy on his cell phone who told me Melissa was sleeping on the
couch at Jamie's house. "Is she all right?" I asked. "Yeah,
she's okay," said Jeremy. "Don't
worry, Mom. I'll look out for her. Love you." "Okay, tell
Melissa I love her and to call me if she needs anything. Bye."
I hung up the phone, thinking, "Jeremy
is looking out for Melissa."
Somehow, I know she'll be okay.
Always,
Melody
New email address: melodywrites@comcast.net
http://www.deadjournal.com/users/melodywrites/
|